A delayed round-up of fairly recent prompt responses. Always a fun thing to do. Not only does it help to get me writing, it also stretches what I think I can do, and reading other people’s replies is a treasure trove of ideas, inspiration and learning material. All good.
Don’t stay in timberland then whine if you’re chopped down
#hangtenstories 619 (Timberland)
Please linger a little longer
Until I’m a little stronger
#hangtenstories 620 (linger)
She loved like a hummingbird, fast and on the wing
#hangtenstories 621 (hummingbird)
At home, hoping, checking her facebook status, constantly missing her
#hangtenstories 622 (status)
Using devotion
Instead of fostering love
A weak safety net
#hangtenstories 628 (devotion)
Grounded fedora
Singing loud for its supper
Coppers gather round
#hangtenstories 629 (fedora)
In silence, people will hear the tacit answer they want.
#hangtenstories 630 (Tacit)
His gentility
Was airs and graces
Superiority
Behind two faces
#hangtenstories 631 (gentility)
Roundabout words because succinct feels brazen on my shy tongue.
#hangtenstories 632 (succinct)
Getting in with the crowd and end up losing yourself.
#hangtenstories 633 (crowd)
This monsoon of ours…brought on by our changing wants.
#hangtenstories 635 (monsoon)
Self-serving flattery to impress made a cliche of his philosophy
#hangtenstories 636 (cliche)
Each word is a pure nugget from your goldmine mind.
#hangtenstories 636 (goldmine)
No sweeter nosegay through this Winter than her floral memory.
#hangtenstories 665 (floral)
Out of my depth and in trouble, drowning in you.
#hangtenstories 666 (trouble)
Snatching in panic
Fearing all those missed chances
Impulse purchasing
#hangtenstories 669 (impulse)
When heavy words failed him, his trumpet sang the tune.
#hangtenstories 670 (trumpet)
Just can’t get enough
Of your beautiful expanse
Breathtaking viewing
#hangtenstories 671 (expanse)
Your eyes are a peculiar shade of coffee and bedroom.
#hangtenstories 672 (peculiar)
Smile for the camera. Cheerful staged and caught on film.
#hangtenstories 673 (cheerful)
The first penny dropped: legal tender for figuring you out.
#hangtenstories 686 (first)
Her skin was a folio. Her mystery in the folds.
#hangtenstories 687 (folio)
The mind can invent what the hearts knows is fantasy.
#hangtenstories 688 (invent)
Poet, jumpstart my dead heart
And turnover this cold mind
#hangtenstories 689 (poet)
Your candle went out, leaving me with the longest dark.
#hangtenstories 693 (candle)
Events soothed by time, made painfully recent by keen memory
#hangtenstories 696 (recent)
The mirror’s cruelty luring us to interact with shallow companions
#hangtenstories 697 (interact)
One plus one is us
Such simple arithmetic
But divisible
#hangtenstories 694 (simple)
Bringing light into her life…bound to leave a shadow
#hangtenstories 701 (shadow)
Take refuge for a while
In gentle arms and smile
#hangtenstories 703 (refuge)
Your hello and my goodbye coincide, wishing we’d both pause.
#hangtenstories 705 (coincide)
Blank page, drying ink
Vociferous are my doubts
Whitespace overwhelms
#hangtenstories 707 (vociferous)
His cuisine surprised her senses, stirring old appetites for breakfast.
#hangtenstories 708 (cuisine)
Can make a chain or a treasure out of memory.
#hangtenstories 713 (treasure)
Angling for something
With lies adjacent to truth
Overfishing trust
#hangtenstories 714 (adjacent)
The bake is done, now icing doubts with sweetened hope.
#hangtenstories 731 (bake)
‘I assure you’ loses value the further away you are.
#hangtenstories 732 (assure)
This timid language
Where love is struggling to speak
Gently feel the way
#HaikuChallenge (love)
Careful tiptoeing
Fearing the crunch of eggshells
Loving in peril
#HaikuChallenge (peril)
Selfish attraction
Not letting go when you should
Decaying orbit
#HaikuChallenge (orbit)
Various flavours
An assortment box loving
Leave the nutty ones
#HaikuChallenge (various)
Some always profit
As the fearful say bless you
Posies line pockets
#HaikuChallenge (bless)
Me and my big mouth
Find out how deep I can dig
Naive shovelling
#HaikuChallenge (deep)
Through computer screens
And browser diagnostics
Disguising the sick
#HaikuChallenge (sick)
If you make us cheap
It’s easier to throw out
Misdeclaring goods
#HaikuChallenge (cheap)
Comfort or unease
In this moment of quiet
Lonely or alone
#HaikuChallenge (quiet)
I got a copy
He bought the original
Awe within our means
#HaikuChallenge (original)
The image was clear
Interpretation was skewed
Parallax error
#HaikuChallenge (image)
So long without flight
You’ve forgotten you have wings
The sky still mourns you
#HaikuChallenge (long)
Have been on both sides
Of what it is to manage
Work then getting by
#HaikuChallenge (manage)
This or the other
Where grass is always greener
Choosing sows regrets
#HaikuChallenge (other)
Spilt blood looks so deep
No bottom to it at times
Things go unanswered
#HaikuChallenge (blood)
You said follow me
And I slipped my hand in yours
Footprints side by side
#HaikuChallenge (follow)
The silt we stir up
Sedimentary answers
Buried under why
#HaikuChallenge (why)
People on the wing
And twisting murmuration
An unsettled roost
#HaikuChallenge (people)
Those piano keys
In the comfort of our bar
Slowly unlocks me
Ripples on the lake
Where we once swam together
Raining saltwater
Our words have shattered
And each sigh slices deeper
Silence drains us dry
#HaikuChallenge (sigh)
All those little lies
Slipped smoothly into habit
Yes, I’m fine, thank you
#HaikuChallenge (little)
Saying you resist
When nothing tempts or threatens
Claiming unearned praise
#HaikuChallenge (resist)
Often misvalued
The first of so many things
Paid some hefty bills
#HaikuChallenge (first)
Thought contentment lay
In never having to yearn
Lived in denial
#HaikuChallenge (yearn)
Plant hope in dry hearts
Like a pioneer species
Dreaming of forests
#HaikuChallenge (plant)
Digging foundations
Found footings from former times
History grounds us
#HaikuChallenge (history)
Fearing losing out
Snap up plenty on offer
Manufactured need
#HaikuChallenge (offer)
No encore call for
You, me and us in three acts
It was all for show
#HaikuChallenge (show)
Wear filtered glasses
Through which to see the famous
An unfocused view
#HaikuChallenge (famous)
Two sides of a coin
Willing to be and to do
Must invest for growth
#HaikuChallenge (willing)
A grey area
Thinking never or maybe
Cliff edge’s fine lines
#HaikuChallenge (never)
Howling past the door
Blows a sympathetic wind
Spooky backing group
#HaikuChallenge (spooky)
Not pausing for thought
Trying to manage too much
Predestination
#HaikuChallenge (manage)
Just build a bypass
Past cities’ clogged arteries
Ignored congestion
#HaikuChallenge (bypass)
He said I believe
And I believed him back then
Should have known better
#HaikuChallenge (believe)
With each word you say
Our light shifts into the red
Becoming distant
#HaikuChallenge (light, each)
An afternoon treat
A Curacao sky on ice
Melt into evening
Learning to let go
Can’t carry this anymore
Last straw weighs the most
#HaikuChallenge (anymore)
Thought you were too loud
But your quiet makes me ache
White noise can’t cover
#HaikuChallenge (quiet)
I took a short route
You took one fraught with danger
Both got six feet deep
#HaikuChallenge (fraught)
Bent oak trees point the way their sculptor #mistral went, where he drew back curtains of wintry clouds, dried his earth-tone palette and blew dust off distant mountains.
#vss365
After it broke from a nasty fall, I never thought this heart of mine would quicken again to pump a #blush across my cheeks.
#vss365
‘It hurts, Gramps.’
‘Aye, and I wish I could say heartbreak gives lifelong immunity against fallin’ badly again, but it’s more like a string of booster jabs.’
‘How many before you met Gramma?’
‘It were #nine.’
‘Ow!’
‘Yeah, but she were worth the hurt. She were a panacea.’
#vss365
Can’t believe your folks left you this house! his eager exploration declares. Why do you wait on the #stair? his laughing asks as he rushes past. Nursery right here, his smile boasts. Why the down face? his frown demands. But he never lived here; all he sees is veneer.
#vss365
He stared; her vase had broken into so many fragments, scattering out like blood splatter from some violent, unforgivable crime. When his daughter rushed in, he smiled ruefully: old hands, eh? He watched her pick up the pieces, envying #china that knew how to look broke.
#vss365
‘That’s funny!’
‘What is, Gramps?’
‘That they called this thing #internet.’
‘Oh?’
‘Yeah…all this clickbait, cat-fishin’ an’ fishin’.’
‘How so?’
‘Well, look at ye all, hooked on yer screens! Baited and practically leaping ‘into the net’.’
#vss365
You just need better eyes
You scolded me unkindly
When will you realise
You’re following that blindly
What you need is within me
And what you choose to #observe
Is unnecessary
And not quite what I deserve
For this #cathedral I’ve built
Love me, be absolved of guilt
#vss365
Where a zebra becomes a #wolf threatening the sun, and our summer day start to chill.
#vss365
Gonna #disappear
For a short breather
Try to reorganise
And rest these tired eyes
Cos I’m a bit cross-eyed
Bit frazzled and fried
So I’m going to chill
And rest up until
The words don’t get muddled
And I’m less befuddled
#vss365
The tea is long past #tepid … can’t nurse it no more.
#vss365
Go on #laugh out loud
Go roll on the floor
Sockless and assless
If that suits you more
Ignore the tight crowd
With their tighter lips
Who think it madness
As your laughter rips
That heavy storm cloud
From your once blue skies
And tears rain proud
From too long dry eyes
#vss365
Taking down our pictures as you fill rubbish bags. You talk of moving on, how this will be good for both of us. Maybe it will. As the walls got thicker from framed moments we barely looked at, we got thinner until we both got paper-cuts from our #poster thin marriage.
#vss365
‘The men say he’s mean.’
‘Don’t let others see for ye. He gives #thanks in simpler ways.’
‘Really, Gramps?’
‘Ye need to see further, lass. There ain’t no fence he won’t help fix or farmer he’ll turn down in time of need. Some forget that quick when life’s comfortable.’
#vss365
He paused. Timing was everything. He knew she’d weep and demand an encore, but he’d had his soliloquy prepped for weeks for this #finale. The stage was set, but she stole his limelight when she slid her ring across the table and said his performance of late lacked drama.
#vss365
He loved with #relish. It went with everything, adding a bit of salt here, sweetness there, bitterness at times, or a heat that burnt but felt so nice. He made me hungry, greedy and want to lick fingers clean, made me love the heat in the kitchen.
#vss365
‘Don’t mourn lost #opportunity, lass. Ye’ll never leave the wake and waste on simple fare and regret. Bury yer hurt and doubts and go make yerself another.’
#vss365
This #lassitude wraps around; cosy at first…a welcomed embrace when the mind is fraught. But then it tightens, smothers and chokes, a weight you can’t throw off. And it feeds itself, getting fatter as you waste away, telling yourself you’re not hungry anyway. But…
#vss365
It was meant to be black and white, easy. Kill the beast, get the hide so a foreigner got a hearthrug he could brag over. But the #zebra was black and red and his mate was a mess under dripping hooves. The poacher yelled and ran…but he was one, and the zebra were many.
#vss365
They made glorious moments where their edges overlapped. He tried to urge her on; she tried to settle him down. His mundane was her #extreme and they just frayed each other’s seams. But darned hearts are stronger and a little wiser for their unravelling.
#vss365
His words chiselled her jibe by jibe, hacking away, leaving gouges and grooves her thoughts followed into pools of his own #irrational design. But she was deeper than he thought, and he drowned in the shadows from the valleys he’d sculpted and the gaslights he’d lit.
#vss365
‘Love can be short, lass; don’t mean it’s any less for it.’
‘You knew it’d end, didn’t you, Gramps?’
‘Ye both came to see the same thing so different. Where he saw gentle hills you saw mountains, and for yer #narrow valleys he saw gorges. Ye couldnae walk far together.’
#vss365
‘Do you think we should’ve become mountaineers and learnt to abseil?’
‘Maybe, lass, but you cannae do both at the same time and be together.’
‘I feel so…’
‘It just don’t work sometimes. The wise know this. An’ on yer mountain or on yer rope it ain’t #gutless to let go.’
#vss365
The suffering seems so soundless
A cry a drop in deep oceans
Gathering to break on deaf shores
Salting remains with soft shushes
The guity #denounce the loudest
With their rogue wave protestations
Sinking suspicions to sea floors
Where the weight of silence crushes
#vss365
Expert in camouflage, when her #sob broke through their giggles, she smiled, wiped away a tear and laughed louder. They never guessed a thing and later said she’d been the life of the party.
#vss365
In the cafe, the sugar and jug of cream between them and their barricades of hot unsweetened black coffee. A mere #hiccup had put them at odds. The wrong name slipped out, a secret spilt, and seeing it in each other’s eyes, the correction would never make them be right.
#vss365
With purpose or not
We #engineer our own fate
Results may vary
#vss365
A visceral rhythm
Hijacking tongues and hips
Infectious tradition
On pleomorphic lips
Where secrets spread and flow
Hidden in #calypso
#vss365
It didn’t happen all at once. His collapse was done in stages, prolonged: a #cascade failure. Maybe that’s why no one noticed as he fell in bits, until dashed on rock bottom, his pieces just floated away into ‘what ever happened to him, anyway?’
#vss365
Does you good to #wallow just a little, every now and again, to ease the daily bites and stings and remember we can feel contentment, delight and pleasure in simple joys. Just don’t stay too long…’til you’re wrinkly and the rest of living has passed you by.
#vss365
Is it really that #obvious
I haven’t got the foggiest?
No clue, no plan, no overview
Of all the things I have to do
I thought by now I’d have some clue
Of the best ways of getting through
Based on some clever strategy
But it’s just fine cos you’re with me
#vss365
Am I #restored?
I make queries
In the mirror
As though this thing
Left welts or marks
That disappear
When healing’s done
I see nothing
My skin is thick
Learning too well
To tell its lies
About someone
I once knew well
In shallow glass
The stranger smiles
Gives no answer
#vss365
That’s it! That is the final #nudge
Pushing me to single living
With a sigh and much lip smacking
You polished off my homemade fudge
#vss365
‘Gramps, why’ve you left the last row of beans?’
‘I know what it’s like to have a belly as empty as yer wallet yet see excess from fields rot in shops and cupboards. Sometimes in taking too much, others #obtain too little.’
‘Charity.’
‘Nae, lass. Harvesting is work.’
#vss365
The #hatch closes and thru the small window you see me. You collapse under my smile and allow them to pull you away. I wait until you’re gone before my tears fall into the cold saltwater rising up around my neck. I sigh, strangely content: I couldn’t face what you will. #vss36
‘Why ye sulkin’, lass?’
‘Teacher asked us what #aurora were and the kids laughed when I said it was Mother Nature washing out her ink #bottles after painting the day, like Gramma told me.’
‘Ah, lass, sometimes a thing may be true in one way, but be right in many.’
#vss365
He woke under starry skies, wondering how he’d escaped the horror lurking within the tunnels. His ecstatic breath exploded from his chest in heady laughter, and at the alien sound, the glow-worms on the #cavern ceiling blinked out, one by one.
#vss365
Are you on the same page as me?
He asks oh so impatiently
No I’m reading where you’re skimming
To the end I’m just beginning
You’re reducing each #chapter
That I devour with rapture
And I realise you leapfrog
To what must be an epilogue
Did you have the same book as me?
#vss365
‘It’s so easy for them, Gramps. I can’t get the knack!’
‘Hmm. There’s them born to a #craft, talented ones, like yer friends, and then there’s the rest of us, who have to dig down and in and work and fail dozens o’ times to learn we had the knack all along. Practise.’
#vss365
She sits opposite, gnarled hands above the crystal ball and her silver charms dangle like faithless swords of Damocles, as she peers through me to some distant time and place and my future condenses in her eyes; a perfect salted #globe falls, stabbing the last of me.
#vss365
With a #crown of daisies, she ruled over my Summer.
#vss365
This lasting impression of you
Still leaving creases in my skin
A flexibility issue
Bending along your old scoring
My paper heart cannot forget
#DimpleVerse #poet #poetry #micropoetry #vss #mpy #poetrycommunity #WritingCommunity #poem #prompt
An hourglass we fear to turn
A stage of life where we yearn
To make a moment timeless
And memory limitless
But no life in sand held fast
Trapped in an echoing past
#DimpleVerse #vss #history #micropoetry #mpy #Poetry #prompt
Ballroom galaxy
Hosting a glimmering dance
For our long, last waltz
Held in spiral arms
Of milkyway moves
And music of the spheres
#DimpleVerse #micropoetry #vss #poetry #mpy #space #cherita #prompt
You gave no chance to face
The love smothering us
Allowed no state of grace
To exist between us
Stealing the confession
From my uneasy tongue
With your easy passion
Only playing along
If you’d let me confess
Would it have hurt us less?
#DimpleVerse #vss #poetry #prompt
You are my alchemist
Taking my burden
Turning it to gold
Not gifting immortality
But healing my words
And giving life to dreams
#DimpleVerse #micropoetry #vss #poetry #mpy #cherita #prompt
Threatening to burst
Shattering silence
Low clouds are gathering
So dark and deafening
With the echoes of rain
Upon the window pane
And testing patience
In these times of thirst
#DimpleVerse #vss #Autumn #poetry #mpy #clouds #prompt
This red thread
Spooling out
To stretch between
As long as wanted
As short as needed
As strong as silk
#DimpleVerse #23words #cherita #micropoetry #vss #poetry #Japan #3words #destiny #prompt
Thread between us all
Red strands weaving through the air
Living tapestry
#DimpleVerse #23words #haiku #micropoetry #vss #poetry #Japan #3words #destiny #prompt
With the remains of the day
Building castles on a cloud
Where everyone’s allowed
To make mortar from wishes
And imagination riches
Makes sovereigns of beggars
And those in wordly cold fetters
Are finally flying away
#DimpleVerse #vss #micropoetry #mpy #prompt
Found our plot
Eager hands work the land
Hopes beneath the soil
Tended with keen care
And tender patience
Grows our memory garden
#DimpleVerse #23words #cherita #vss #poetry #micropoetry #prompt
You were the sweetest agony
Unravelling me from heart to head
And expectations wound so tightly
You let spool out like too tense thread
And I take the first breath I’ve ever had
#DimpleVerse #Romance #vss #poetry #mpy #micropoetry #love #Neruda #prompt
Just slip your hand in mine
And whisper all is fine
Because at this moment
Shoulders down and back bent
I’ve lost my way and view
Of where we travel to
So sit a while with me
And remind me gently
This road will get us there
I apply layers of clay; sculpt the memory of a face from bits of bone found in a shallow grave. But the face I give the police wont be yours. I’ll always be the last who had you.
#TalesNoir
Your delicious shiver when my breath haunts your neck and the nervous stutter to your walk whenever I step into the corner of your wide eye are my bread and honey. Your distress is my appetiser. Soon, I’ll want my dinner, and you’re getting sweetly tender.
#TalesNoir
The monster’s under my bed, Nanny. Go look! Please! Closer, Nanny…you gotta get right down to see it in the dark. That’s it!
You see it?
It sees you.
Shhhh, Nanny…don’t kick the floorboards so! You’ll wake Mummy and Daddy, and I don’t want to feed them to it yet.
#TalesNoir
My save! That was my save, my moment and you stole it, sweeping in like you owned it. I was close enough to touch her, to see sweat like pearls on her skin, but they only saw you. And you wonder what turns us bad. Next time it’ll only be me…and there will be no hero.
#TalesNoir
Lady Luck drifted through the bar, licking the bent necks of winners and losers alike. Losers tasted of salt and copper, but winners were bittersweet: shame and glory mixed with whisky. She lapped it up, lifted the hem of her skirt, teased them both into one more game.
#TalesNoir
They pulled too hard
Too fast and far
Now left deformed
Inelastic
Past the hope
Of returning
Back to before
Stretched out of shape
Feeling and living
Foreign lines of
Plasticity
You cannot change
Life is brittle
And set in place
After their touch
#DarkLines 300 plasticity